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Is your story clear
to someone who didn't write it?

Download the free Story Clarity Checklist and discover the ten questions every author should ask before drafting or editing.

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Blunt Bestie truth

If readers are confused, they stop caring. Clarity isn't optional. It's everything.

Cover of The Story Clarity Checklist featuring Roxie, the Blunt Bestie rabbit editor

A clearer story starts here

See your manuscript through a reader's eyes.

You know the history, motivations and secrets because you created them. Your reader only knows what made it onto the page.

This four-page printable helps you test the foundations of your story, check the reader's journey and choose the most important clarity fix. No enormous workbook. No vague advice. Just ten useful questions and a plan.

  • Yes / Needs Work / Not Sure checkboxes
  • Quick diagnostic notes for every question
  • A simple clarity score and next-step guide
  • A first-fix action plan you can use immediately

Ten questions. One clearer book.

From “something feels off” to knowing what to fix.

01

Find the fuzzy bits

Spot unclear goals, weak stakes and story threads your reader may struggle to follow.

02

Choose the first fix

Use the clarity score and action plan to decide what needs your attention before anything else.

03

Write with confidence

Strengthen your story foundation before you draft, or diagnose what is wobbling during edits.

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